Everything is basically done today, except for the wiki which I will soon work on and the I'll be done!!! The essay is still pretty long, around 4,000 words. Most time spent today was trying to reword things and trying to take out unnecessary things to make it a little shorter.
Total time spent: 40 minutes
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Today I included a finalized works cited and an OPVL page onto the rough draft. There were some edits I had to go through and I also rewrote the conclusion to the essay because I felt like the one that was there was too weak.
Total time spent: 30 minutes Again, today was a very busy day and I felt that since before lunch today at school that I was probably not going to have a lot of time at home to work on it, so I went to the cafeteria at lunch and fixed the quotes on my essay. I realized that they were not in MLA style.
Total time spent: 22 minutes I had lots to do today for my other classes and just did some edits to the rough draft. Additionally, I tried to brainstorm some ideas of what I can cut down to make the essay shorter.
Total time spent: 20 minutes Today I finished writing the rough draft of my liberty essay! Well, with the exception of the conclusion... Now all I have to do is type it up tomorrow! I really feel confident about this essay I think it is even greater than the Vitruvian Man essay.
Total time spent: 5 hours Once done with my other homework, I decided it was best to start off with getting the work done on my sources to get that off my shoulders. From Diigo, I seperated all my sources into two categories; primary sources and secondary sources. Then I spent a while looking over them and analysing until finally, I did the two required OPVL's. One OPVL was on the Declaration of Independence, a primary source. The second one was done for section 4 in chapter 6 of Modern World History, our history textbook, a secondary source. Then I continued to write the rough draft of my liberty essay. I can say that I am half way done and expect to finish tomorrow so that i can type on Monday and turn it in! :)
Total time spent: 5 hours I went back to the history textbook today and looked over on what information it had based on the Enlightenment. There was some useful additional information that I took note of. Afterwards, I looked on some of the primary sources that the textbook used and took some in consideration to use as my primary sources, since I am mainly in need of them. Then, I started to look over my sources to get an idea of which ones would be worthy enough to do an OPVL on them. At last, I started to work on my first body paragraph of the essay, but did not finish or took it very far. I hope to get a lot done tomorrow!
Total time spent: 1 hour What I did today was to reread the insructions to keep them fresh in my mind and remind myself what to get done, but there was no further work able to be done, not very happy about it. This week has been filled with a lot of homework lately...mostly studying. I AM GETTING SOMETHING DONE TOMORROW! There is no way that tomorrow I will not be able to get things done.
Total time spent: 7 minutes Today was quite a day! I had a Cross Country meet, had lots of fun and came home late and exhausted. Finished my homework and did some studying, but by then I could barely stay awake. As an athlete, I take my health very seriously and believe that in order to perform at my best in both school and sports, there must first be quality sleep. There was nothing accomplished today.
Total time spent: 0 minutes There was not much that I was able to do today. I had a lot of homework and studying to do for math and chemistry (for some reason its always those two subjects that demand a lot of time). What I was able to do was only to write down a few ideas for the essay, of what I should say on certain topics, just suggestions so that I keep those in mind while I am writing.
Total time spent: 15 minutes |